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SENSE POETRY Exercise: CANISIUS


Hello guys ang gals!

here are some sample poetry (some of which i have edited a bit) from the exercise we had in class:

(gallardo)
Hugging someone so tight in your arms under the moonlight
Manly sweet voice saying my name, melts my heart
Scent of your perfume as you pass by, makes me follow you
Thirst of love in my throat longs for you
Complete in your arms under the night sky, with the stars and moon looking down on us.

(fabian, margaret)
Twinkling stars, mysteriously colored clouds
Whistling wind, romantic music, slow steady breaths, my heavy beating
Roses, fresh crisp wind
Moments
Free, light, contented
Awed by the beauty of the night.

(palma)
Smile brighter than sunshine
Beat of my own heart beating against your chest
Your scent lingering on my shirt
Sweet, moist lips
Satin hands brush against mine
I love you.

(abdelrahman)
Clouds floating about
Birds chirping so loud
Summer flowers
Raindrops
Gust of wind
Sun shining brightly.

(kamlon)
dead people walking, looking at me
people screaming with their lives
disgusting odor
sweet, salty, bitter ****
really scared, heart jumping out of my chest.

(sakaluran)
alone and unloved in the future
conscience telling me to stop waiting
his perfume in my clothes
mouth-waterign lasagna in my mouth
blood gushing out of my wrists
ending my useless life.

(paalisbo)
things that blind people can't see
music that deaf people can't hear
what i see
what i feel
alone in a crowded room
losing my sanity.

(miranda)
stars, rainbows, sunshine
nothing but this song, lalalala
vanilla, vanilla, vanilla
strawberry champagne with sheer love
high, ever high
happy and restless
weird and strange am i
nothing else
but nonsense
making me insane

(elumba)
girls
talking
breath, saliva, body
hot.

(lim, lizza)
italian lovers along the bay of naples
mellow music
breeze of the sea
sweet scent of the flowers
pasta melts so deliciously.
so alone.
alone today.

(tan)
stars shining but broken
whispers of love tunes
routine meat
sweet plums in summer
shivers down my spine
we are meant to be.



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Tarnga Jedi Kinght of Jedi Master orj78

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wow, galing, mga poets tlga..

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waaaaaaaaahh.. nakasali pa pala ako diyan.. yehey! hahahahahaha..

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the best talaga yun kay y-en... hahaha.. inspired talaga kasi siya eh..

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save the best for last? hehe..

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hahahaha..agree..... LOL

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Tarnga Jedi Kinght of Jedi Master orj78

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agree? flattered.. hehehe..

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Twi'ilek Jedi Knight

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hahaha.. korny nga poem ko, milagro nasali pa.. LOL

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don't be too humble.. maganda nga yan, inspired na inspired ang dating.. hehe..

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Twi'ilek Jedi Knight

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hahaha.. di yan ako inspired diyan.. tired and bored yan ako... waaahhhh...

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I especially liked the work of elumba..

very.. straight to the point.. very.. hmm.. exotic..

Certified lalaking-lalaki ang dating! hehe..

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Twi'ilek Jedi Knight

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hahahaha.. oo nga... straight to the point talaga..

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lyka wrote:

hahaha.. di yan ako inspired diyan.. tired and bored yan ako... waaahhhh...


see? kahit tired and bored ka, nkakawrite ka pa rin ng good poem.. dba? hehe..

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Twi'ilek Jedi Knight

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hahaha.well, at least nakagawa...

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Herskan Jedi Knight of Jedi Master orj78

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grabe...inspired man talaga sila...bro post mo rin mga powems ng gonzaga...hehe

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