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xake


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Bitter-Sweet Winter


 


I was on my window viewing the snow,


As it falls to my cheeks and in my soul,


How lovely to see the pure white of it


As it look as white elephants that lay on me.


 


I never imagine


That this day would come


This day is full of fun


Though my winter’s soul is under the sun


 


My Bitter-sweet winter


Is too warm yet cold


As the dove next to me is too bold


For I doubt that it was told


 


My lovely tree


Is full of memories


As the light, flickers on the dark room


With the color of me


 


 


My home is not a house


For its full of love and care


For it always be in the air


That winds my heart and hair


 


The snow drops like lemon drops


In my underneath skin


As I kiss my girl


Under the mistletoe mean


 


I never want that my bitter-sweet day would be sad


That would make me blue and numb


I never want this day to begun


Without my family on the stand


 


Will I stake this day without them


Or fight my perspective and wait them


To celebrate this bitter-sweet day with love and fun


For this will never be the same


 


The bitter-sweet day


Is too important to me


For this is my awaited time             


The time of Christmas Eve



-- Edited by xake at 19:04, 2006-12-27

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nice beginning..confusing ending..

i really don't get your point of the poem

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sana may isnow dito sa Pilipinas... hehehe...

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lyka wrote:

nice beginning..confusing ending..

i really don't get your point of the poem


lyka the poem is about a person who is lonely in his place! waiting and wanting for his family to come and celebrate the hristmas eve...


1st stanza:


i was in the window staring those snow that covers the entire place and that looks as white elephants...


2nd stanza:


he never imagine that this day would come as he is busy with the days... but though he was shocked that it is almost eve his family is not yet there to celebrate with him but his spirit is in the air...


3rd stanza:


he doubt that his christmas would be warm but the truth is it is cold... for his family is out of sight, even his family does not tell him that they will be home tonight...


4th stanza:


his christmas tree is full of memories as it passed all the times that his family is together with him... helping hm decorate it and every decoration on it has its own meaning of his self and his family


5th stanza:


he would like that his house would be a home that love wouls have confounded it!!!for even it was not christmas, as long as his family is with him, it will always feel like christmas...


6th stanza:


he hope that even without his family, he would be with his girl under the mistletoe and kiss her.


7th stanza:


he said that his christmas would not start without his family in his sight


8th Stanza:


he liked to celebrate this day without them or celebrate them if they would be on his sight... will he would wait them or continue his christmas even they are not with him...


9th stanza:


though he is sad he would like that his christmas would be celebrated for that day is to important for him... and every one!!!



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so00...s000...



mind boggling..



hehe



(walang saw saw?...ohhwwww too000 bad)



wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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walang gustong mag saw saw

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