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xake


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I had loved a girl who was sweet and nice,


A girl who had charisma and a mind,


The girl whom I loved was not a joke for me,


For loving her for that long time was not a dream to see,


 


I never loved that long,


For the love is just for TRUTH and not for false,


A girl is not just a doll to play,


But something to take for a long, long way,


 


It’s no challenge,


It’s no joke,


And neither a mission to achieve,


The love that I had for her had been pathetic for those years,


 


But these time,


My mind was made clear,


And bared the mystery 'bout me,


The love that I had set free was too hard for me,


 


For loving that long,


Was too important to me,


That person whom I longed to love,


Is now my great best friend?


 

p.s.: be sensitive to others, and you might just find out that your seatmate is in deep love with you….

-- Edited by orj78 at 22:53, 2006-07-12

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kaw ba gumawa n2ng poem zar? nice xa

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wow nyc.... go for it!!!!



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hala!!!!!!!!! NICE! hehehe

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waw galing ang ganda ng poem
Buy the way who made this poem???

-- Edited by jestoni500 at 22:38, 2006-07-08

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xake


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hello


i was the one who made the poem,


 and i also want to thank you for the good compliment/comments....


a million thanks to you all..... 


 



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cool

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ei!


nice ng poem...


hehehe....


ala lng...




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xake wrote:
I had loved a girl that is sweet and nice,
A girl that had a charisma and mind,
That girl that I loved is no joke for me,
For loving her for that long time is not a dream to see,
 
I never loved that long,
For the love is just for TRUTH and not for false,
A girl is not just a doll to play,
But something to take for a long, long way,
 
It’s no challenge,
It’s no joke,
And neither a mission to achieve,
That love that I had for her is been pathetic for those years,
 
But these time,
My mind was made clear,
And bare the mystery on me,
The love that I set free is too hard for me,
 
For loving that long,
Is too important to me,
That person that I long to love,
Is now my great best friend?
 p.s.: be sensitive to others, and you might just find out that your seatmate is in deep love with you….


NICE POEM!! hahaha! dont tell me ure in love with your seatmate?!?! OMFG?! hahaha! **that was me, kiddin**

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just keep on writing

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have you ever wondered which hurts most? saying something and wishing you hadn't or saying nothing and wish you had? the most important things are always the hardest to say. don't be afraid to tell someone that you love them. if you do, they might break your heart, but if you don't, you might break theirs.

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Joyax wrote:

have you ever wondered which hurts most? saying something and wishing you hadn't or saying nothing and wish you had? the most important things are always the hardest to say. don't be afraid to tell someone that you love them. if you do, they might break your heart, but if you don't, you might break theirs.

 


mas masikit kapag you dont say what u really feel kc u think na u'll hurt someone...


ive been there na... hehehe... i didnt say what i really felt...


kaya.. parang.. it's killing me inside.. then not koh na nakayanan.. i finally said it... hehehe...


sasabihin rin pla pinatagal pa...


 



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bAbynikki16 wrote:

 
mas masikit kapag you dont say what u really feel kc u think na u'll hurt someone...
ive been there na... hehehe... i didnt say what i really felt...
kaya.. parang.. it's killing me inside.. then not koh na nakayanan.. i finally said it... hehehe...
sasabihin rin pla pinatagal pa...
 


ehem! ken siguro kel

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besty cno yn tinutukoy mo?

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matz wrote:

besty cno yn tinutukoy mo?

 


chikwet!!!


 



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hehehe
chikwet? or baka naman chocolate?
did you mean sikrit?!

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i hope the good reviews you got for your poem inspired you to write some more..
keep on writing poems. hope you'll learn something from your lit class to help you with your writing. there's always room for improvement.

Joyax wrote:

have you ever wondered which hurts most? saying something and wishing you hadn't or saying nothing and wish you had? the most important things are always the hardest to say. don't be afraid to tell someone that you love them. if you do, they might break your heart, but if you don't, you might break theirs.

it hurts more if you keep your emotions bottled up.. because then you'll keep on wondering "what if" or thinking "if only".. and it will bother you forever!!! whahahhhaa... exaggerated talaga ako! pero malay nyo. it could happen!

if things don't work out right, then what the hell! at least, you now know where you stand. you'll never learn if you don't try..

-- Edited by orj78 at 22:45, 2006-07-12

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purpledamaris wrote:

i hope the good reviews you got for your poem inspired you to write some more.. keep on writing poems. hope you'll learn something from your lit class to help you with your writing. there's always room for improvement. Joyax wrote: have you ever wondered which hurts most? saying something and wishing you hadn't or saying nothing and wish you had? the most important things are always the hardest to say. don't be afraid to tell someone that you love them. if you do, they might break your heart, but if you don't, you might break theirs. it hurts more if you keep your emotions bottled up.. because then you'll keep on wondering "what if" or thinking "if only".. and it will bother you forever!!! whahahhhaa... exaggerated talaga ako! pero malay nyo. it could happen! if things don't work out right, then what the hell! at least, you now know where you stand. you'll never learn if you don't try..-- Edited by orj78 at 22:45, 2006-07-12

yah your ryt...


if you done something that ou musn't accept the fact that you just did it...


and if did nothing but you should do something- accept the fact that you just fooled yourself...


and wag nyo sisihin sa iba kung bkit yun nagaw o hndi nyo gnawa....


be praktical...


ganyan na man tayo eh....


hehehe



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cooL poEm.. hehehe..

la lang..

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a great lover would let the relationship last,...

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wooooooooooooooooooooooo


ASTIG AHH.................





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xake wrote:

a great lover would let the relationship last,...

 




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anO man niKki?!

confused ka nanaman?! hehehehe..

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heheeh.... nag set ako ng love free pero di maalis sa puso kaya... yun bumalik ang love ko at maslalong tumindi pah...hehehe

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cool poem....


hope the girl knows what she's losing

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yah.....no point of resisting....

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way can i do if that gurl has a principle...may prinsipyo sa buhay...
at walang makakahadlang nito... kahit pa gane love na nya yung isang tao...pinipigilan nya ito...
kasi studies daw muna... pero di ako yun isa kung klasmeyt...well ouch nga!!! pero okyah lang..
i am still open... i am still waiting for the possibilities...ewan ko nga ba... bakit,eh!!! i am inlove to that gurl since 2nd year pa eh... hmmm... love nga naman...
at di talagah nagbabago isip ko..
kahit na nagkagf na ako siya parin iniisip ko...haay!!!

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believe me man...every girl has principle...


theres no such girl dad does not stand for something...whjatever that may be...


 


if this girl's principle is totally against the two of you...you can do nothing but accept...


 


 


 


then again.......you can also fight for your principles and beliefs....


 


if you thinks standing for what you believe in is important...



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xake


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isa lang masasabi ko:

i #### her now!!!
why?! siguro nga di ako ang lalake para sknya peo kala ko matatag sya (yun pa gane ang sabi ng friends nya)
pero wrong ang narinig ko...
kala ko studies daw mauna pero mas powerful pa rin ang love...

It was a big OUCH for me!!!

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you know you won't be able to make her change her mind on what she wants to think is more important....



if you really **** her....then you'd be willing to wait...

if she really **** you asell...then it'll all work out in the end....

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believe me man...
you dont know wat i feel....

it gave me $$$$ ache!!!

but wat can i do if her choice was already made up...

in not the lord/god to let her change her mind.... but i tell you it hurts a lot!!!

Setting my love free
is not an objective nor job...

i set my love free because i know that these will be the best, not onli for me but also for all of us...

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mAyabe i don't know exactly what you feel...


but i'm not gonna say that i don't have any idea to what your talking about mon...



your not the only one who feels these pains......


a lot of people do...



the point is....



it comes.....it goes.....





but i don't really have to tell you that...being as you'd made up your mind in letting her go.......

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you rock mon....

you sure are a help!!!

but you know you have a point in that situation!!!

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what situation? basta....


it seems you preety much know what your gonna do about this girl...



wich youthe best of luck mon....

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hahahaha... i will not seek for revenge


but i will make that gurl know what is her wrong...



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okay...now that I'm not against...


I'm not into the taking revenge thing...

but making her know that at some point..she hurt you...doesn't sound so bad..


hehe..lol

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ay naku cazr...
kakaiba ka tlga gumawa ng poem!!!

hehe...

but...
wag ka masyado mainlove..kasi, di mo alam kung anong mangyayari dyan sa feelings mo..
baka sa bandang huli..kung gaano mo xa kamahal, baka bumalik sa iyo yung opposite feeling mo para sa kanya..
and worse mas masakit pa..!!!
huhu.. learn to let go of the things which aren't for you..

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hello to all...

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elow din sa inyo...


nice poem



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yoh m0n....



wazzup cavem0n???

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What shall i do?


if i felt this blue?!


as i see her


my love begun to break there!!!


 


in short: anu gagawin ko kung may mahal siyang iba at ako dito nag aasang babalik siya?!diba?!!!!



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well, you simply cant do anything about it..you cant force her to love back

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mahirap naman kasi magmahal ng tao na di ka kayang mahalin... kaya gane napaka sakit diba?! kung aalisin mo naman sa isip it will take you a very long tym.... siguro gra-graduate nalang tyo di pa rin maaalis sa isip at puso ko siya.... d*mn sh*t bkit kasi nagka ganito ang pag-ibig... it really hurts a lot diba?! haay! love

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let time heal it lng..
yah, di mu mapigilan di icpn, pro get used to it lng..
ul see nd feel d imprvment =)


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my god.... im really sad ruyt now.... the prom was grteat but sad for me...

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wag mu nlng icpin ngpapalungkot sau!!


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You Were There

you were there when i wanted you
you were there when i didn't
you were there when i needed you
you were there when i couldn't
you were there when i was sick came over took the train brought me minerals made sure i was ok
and you were there when i was lonely and i needed someone to be there and
what about that time when i was unhappy you were there you made me smile cracked a joke made sure i was alright
and you were there everytime
you were there when i lost myself
you were there when i found me
and the times i had no confidence
you were there to revive me
you were there on valentine's day you took a cab from campus and made
your way to my place put on that green lingerie and cuddled up in bed the way only soulmates share
a single sheet and still the very next day you still called me
you were always there for me
and you were there with me on top of the halsted parking lot and we shared a smile
and i gave you flowers that i bought from jewel cause you had said green was always your favourite color
and then we kissed for the very first time under candellight and held on tight
you were there everytime
and you were there when i had a show outside and i sang horribly but you still supported me
with smiles and
said that i still rocked but you never thought that i'd sing something hard like rock you always had me
out to be a coffehouse personality
and i know that one day you won't be able to be there
but we'll still have the corrs and 9 days



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andun din ako han! sa syd !
hehehehe!!
cool piece =)


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hello people!

a pleasant eving

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